Finished News Story

Our story was about YesI skate shop. We interviewed Cameron Lovelace,who is the owner of YesI skate shop. We also interviewed kids who are sponsored including Kyle(Don't know last name),and Kaloe Aguiar. All of my teammates contributed to it. Those teammates are Orria Niitsu,Nathan Gardner,and Tyler Pagela. Also Our teacher,Mr Sanderl because he taught us all the things we needed to have a good HikiNo video.

The final turned out not bad,but could have a few more improvements. One improvement could be the b-roll,like to place the b-roll in the right place. Also we could've got a few interviews because the interview with Cameron Lovelace was like 3/4 of the video. So it could've been shorter. So I am
happy and also not happy with our results.

I agree with our critique results because our story had many flaws.We got many 3s.Some audio was out of tune.A lot of the B-roll never matched with the A-Roll.So the Critique pretty much matched with what the video had.We could've done better,but we did not.