The title of my Visual Poem is "fitness". I have did this topic because I enjoy fitness,and also because my dad owns a gym.In the beginning,it just shows many people working out.I think that the people working out really makes the people feel that they are at the gym watching the people work out,or maybe even feel like you are working out.Also shows people frolicking,so it gives you a good feeling.
On a few of the pictures,I added the Ken Burns effect,which is basically like the visual zooming in or zooming out. I didn't have time to color effects because I wanted to turn the visual poem in on time.I would've made some color effects on the picture of my dad surfing.I also put in music in the background,like 80s jazz music.I put in some pictures of just like random things like blobs and concrete so that those pictures can cover the spots I never filmed.
I'm am satisfied,and not satisfied.Im not satisfied because those random pictures didn't have to be in there.I just put those substitute pictures in there because I never got some filming.I got the filming that I needed. I am satisfied because the filming that I was able to get,It turned out pretty good.Like The filming in the very beginning.It showed a bunch of people lunging.I think I did Pretty good on the Visual Poem,but I could have done way better.
I really like the visuals, like the people working out
ReplyDeletethe voice was way too loud
I like the generators that you used, really cool!
Good B-Roll !!!
ReplyDeleteYou had to use some of the B-Roll from Final Cut Pro.
Really good audio levels.
I like is the B-roll.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that could be better is the volume of your reading.
I really like the content of your A-roll.
Good visuals
ReplyDeletetoo loud...
good lyrics
Nice and clear audio
ReplyDeleteLower your audio little bit!
Nice b-roll
I liked the music in the background
ReplyDeleteYou stuttered a little bit during the a-roll, and your voice was cut off at the end. ._.
The b-roll of the gym was good.
Good lyrics
ReplyDeleteMusic needs to be a little louder
GOod visuals
Compliment:The b-roll you did shoot was awesome!
ReplyDeleteCriticism:Wasn't really that much b-roll
Compliment: It made me want to exercise
I like how your b-roll matched with what you were saying.
ReplyDeleteYour audio was a bit loud so your begining comes as a surprise.
Other than that I like your music choice it went together with your poem well.
I like the poem lyrics.
ReplyDeleteYou could have balanced the audio and it could be longer
I like the shot of the people running.
visuals were good and fitted fitness
ReplyDeletethere was not that much b-roll
has good Voice over
That shot of the guy surfing was really rad! Great timing! Some of the b-roll didn't seem relevant to the words spoken. I liked the shot of the people working out, really great action!
ReplyDeleteI like when you got the people working out.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing that could be better is to speak a little clearer as.
I also like the shot when you got someone surfing.
good audio
ReplyDeletegood b-roll
nice voice over
I liked the music in the background! It was a little loud, but the lyrics were really good. I liked the lyrics to your poem.
ReplyDeleteCompliment: I like your B-Roll shots
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think your audio was a little too loud and you should've balanced out your audio.
Compliment: And I also liked the way you recited your poem.
I like the b-roll you used.
ReplyDeleteYou could have gotten more b-roll.
I like the words you used in your poem.
Visuals were great of people exercising.
ReplyDeleteSome of the shots were missing at the end so you had to use visuals from photoshop.
Voice over was well recorded
I really like the first shot of your video with the people exercising. You kind of stuttered a little when you were reading. Love the background music
ReplyDeleteReally creative pictures
ReplyDeleteVery loud voice-over
Really great words
I like how you got B-Roll of the people working out
ReplyDeleteYou could've balanced your audio out a bit.
I liked the music you used.
I liked the action b-roll of people moving.
ReplyDeletebalance your audio.
I like the meaning of your poem